Sunday, 15 November 2009

To pluck out the sentence
From the very top of the heap,
And dedicate it to you
With a hopeful question mark
Invisibly attached.
And to wait.

Monosyllabic politeness.
Or silence.
On this side of the chasm,
A paper balloon crumples
Under the weight of sudden


joey said...

The first verse is better.As in very good.
Porerta has some hackneyed

Death on Two Legs said...

You know, the first verse is actually a LEETLE reminiscent of Joey.

blinknmiss said...

@ Joey: There. Itoldyouso.

@ Anushka: Yes. I'm afraid it is.

rhea said...

missed you.

topshe said...

I like the first verse more too. But it's all good. In a way.