To pluck out the sentence
From the very top of the heap,
And dedicate it to you
With a hopeful question mark
Invisibly attached.
And to wait.
Monosyllabic politeness.
Or silence.
On this side of the chasm,
A paper balloon crumples
Under the weight of sudden
Foolishness.
5 comments:
The first verse is better.As in very good.
Porerta has some hackneyed metaphors.na?
You know, the first verse is actually a LEETLE reminiscent of Joey.
@ Joey: There. Itoldyouso.
@ Anushka: Yes. I'm afraid it is.
missed you.
I like the first verse more too. But it's all good. In a way.
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